It'll work, right? I mean, it's good enough?

[He makes a slow semicircle around behind Dedue, careful both to move in the narrow space without bumping him and also not stepping on any of the ducklings that naturally threaten to get underfoot, trying to get a good look at the way he works and handles the kill.]

If it were me, I could make it edible, probably, but I know that's a long way from good.